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Posted by: Don, March 16th, 2013, 8:33am
Xiomara by James A. Bretney - Short, Western - A love story in the Old West. Inspired by the music of Marty Robbins's "El Paso". 17 pages - pdf, format 8)
Posted by: Dreamscale (Guest), March 17th, 2013, 12:04pm; Reply: 1
WTF?  For reals?  Dude...

Hmmm, This is a perfect example of how not to write a script, man.  Just terrible, sorry to say.

The fact that it was written over 5 years ago and not once cleaned up is unforgivable.

If anyone has questions about what overwritten means or looks like, pop this bad boy open.
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