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Posted by: Don, April 24th, 2013, 4:56pm
Pin by Jack Reher - Horror - Remake of the 1988 Pin - pdf, format 8)
Posted by: Haris, June 12th, 2013, 1:49pm; Reply: 1
Hi,
thatīs my first post here and english is not my first language, but i try my best..:))...so here is my belief about the script.
--on some points the action have to go further...
--the dialogue is sometimes not the best..(thatīs just me..)
--show us more thingīs ..we donīt need to get thingīs from dialogue..
I just reached page 4..
but under the dash...pretty ok..:)..go on...
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