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Posted by: Don, May 24th, 2013, 6:54pm
Romance and M Theory by Ashenafi Wolde - Sci Fi, Fantasy, Romance - An ambition writer writes a screenplay to get closer to a star. They meet and have the times of their lives.  A beautiful Romantic story.  A squeal to Quantum Principle and Multiverse (Quantum Stardust). 86 pages - pdf, format 8)
Posted by: TonyDionisio, November 9th, 2013, 10:16am; Reply: 1
Hello,

This logline is a mess.  Do you mean an ambitious writer in the first line? Important logline elements are missing. I suggest reading   - http://www.raindance.org/10-tips-for-writing-loglines/

There could be a good script attached to this post but...

Tony
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