Kukudhi by Phil Antonucci - Horror - A talented, young biological research student comes home for the summer and confronts an ancient evil, forcing her to question her scientific training verses the cultural mythologies of her ancestors while coming to terms with her families link to the horror. 92 pages - pdf, format 8)

Check either screen-writing books, other scripts, or the web on how to write scripts.

You don't need quote marks for your dialogue, and wrylies are set differently to dialogue. Try and avoid things that can't be seen on screen.

Thanks for the reply. I scewed up with the quotes. I have a lot to learn yet. Not sure if you read the whole attempt at a script but if you did can you give me any feed back on the story itself? Was it interesting? Did the characters have potential? We're the few twists in the right direction?
Anything would help.