Paradise Party - Print Topic

Posted by: Don, January 29th, 2014, 5:40pm

Paradise Party by Steven Burton - Short, Drama, LGBT, Humor, Fantasy, Gay - A man celebrates life with creativity, family, and a stranger, before he dies peacefully lying on an ocean beach. 13 pages - pdf format

For production consideration - No comments required

Posted by: realxwriter, February 1st, 2014, 8:19am; Reply: 1

Hi,

Good efforts, but your script is not properly formatted. No one will spend time reading and giving you feedback if they don't think you spent enough time to represent your script properly.

I assume you used a screenplay template in Microsoft Word to write this. It's not good enough. If you don't buy a professional screenwriting software, use Celtx. It's free.

Read the content of this website. It's helpful. http://www.screenwriting.info/

I'll wait for you till you submit a better formatted version. Till then, take care.

Posted by: Kirsten, January 24th, 2017, 5:33am; Reply: 2

Hi Steve, I've seen you on here before, so I know this isn't your first. I tried to read it, but the format put me off from reading further. Realxwriter is correct..Definately work on your formatting. Keep at, keep learning and it will all fall into place. Look forward to the re-write...