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Posted by: Don, May 21st, 2014, 4:39pm
15 by Tim McClelland - Horror - Fifteen years after his abduction at age 10, Adrian’s isolated life begins to change in heart-stopping ways. Raziela, the pretty new neighbor he’s been staring at through binoculars, brazenly makes herself at home in Adrian’s house just when Adrian’s brother, Barton, begins implementing his plan to terrify Adrian out of the house he hasn’t left in fifteen years.  Reality quickly becomes a blur and Adrian will question everything right up until the shocking final minutes. 113 pages - pdf, format 8)
Posted by: Dressel, May 21st, 2014, 8:19pm; Reply: 1
Hey Tim,

Not sure if you're even on here, but you should really think of a way to break your logline down into one succinct sentence.  Also, you don't need to do the marketing-esque type sell in the logline ("up until the shocking final minutes").  You can save that type of stuff for the synopsis.

-Matthew
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