Scam Man by Jared Dante - Short, Drama - Frank an out of work sou chef is down on his luck as he looses his girlfriend and late on paying bills. He desperately seeks a job to prove he can be a provider however he comes across a job that is designed to scam home owners  on their foreclosure.  21 pages - pdf, format 8)

I'd check out your log-line here Jared - sou chef should be Sous Chef, & you need to put an "is" after 'girlfriend and...'

I did look at some of the script, but having a log like that isn't a great start.