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Posted by: Don, June 19th, 2014, 6:45pm
Siren by Allen Wolf - Short, Thriller - A young woman meets a young man who changes her life forever. 34 pages - pdf, format 8)
Posted by: ABennettWriter, June 20th, 2014, 1:01am; Reply: 1
A couple of things:
You need to do some simple formatting changes.
INT. APARTMENT BUILDING - STAIRWELL
SUPER: LONDON, ENGLAND 1976
SOL (age, description) has an action.
MRS LADY (age, description) has an action.
This may help with the length. 34 pages is a bit long for a short, but not long enough for a feature.
The logline is really generic. What kind of characters are these? What's at stake?
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