Broken Wing by Monica Prelooker - Series - Vacations in Flathead, Montana, what can go wrong? The answer starts changing after a couple is found dead after a Full Moon party. - pdf, format 8)

Hi, Monica.

Checked out the teaser. A few grammar issues. Not much. Overall well written and interesting. Let me know if your around and I'll definitely read further, add some notes. And if you have any interest in doing a note exchange, I have a pilot called Over the Line in the series section.

Good luck.