The Wilderness by David Serra - Short, Horror - Found footage short about a how a fishing trip in the woods for two young women turns deadly. - pdf, format 8)

I'm a sucker for a bigfoot story but this is too short for me so there's not enough setup.

I'd like some hint there's a something in the woods before the reveal, this all feels a little too sudden.

Was it for 1 page challenge or similar?

Anthony

Hi David,

I agree with Anthony regarding the setup. Also, I don't think you need the "credits" - they add nothing of importance. Nicely written, otherwise.

Manolis