Paragons and Mortals by Matthew Lincoln - Action, Adventure, Superhero - When a superhero who dreams of being normal meets a normal man who dreams of being super, a friendship develops. A friendship that quickly deteriorates into a one-sided rivalry, leading to the conflict of legends: Good versus evil.  114 pages - pdf, format 8)

your long line and title of the script immediately grabbed my attention. its a good read but you use the word "WE" a lot which is a big no no, i haven't finished the script but it is pact with great action.

the writing is good. easy to visualize what's going on.

i think , me personally i will cut some of the dialogue like when the henchman told gray that  "The guys outside are still holding off the police. Things’ll get crazy if SWAT
shows up" ....me personally i think that's evident and doesn't need to be stated. but that's just how i feel on it.

curious to know how long you've been writing scripts.

the opening reminds me of the will smith movie, john hancock. when John Hancock went a saved those hostage from a gang of robbers.

anways...good read so far.