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Posted by: Don, September 17th, 2014, 7:46pm

Moment of Silence by Ondric Donelson - Short, Drama - A single mother tries to connect with her troubled son. 14 pages - pdf, format 8)

Posted by: LeeOConnor, September 19th, 2014, 7:15am; Reply: 1

Hey Ondric
A nice story and well built up.
I was expecting a bit more at the end. i thought the mother was going to tell her son about his father, why he left, who he is etc. but it left us hanging.

Maybe give us the answer to that question?

Lee

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