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Posted by: Don, October 1st, 2014, 8:39pm
The Old God Of Our Fathers by Peace Seeker - Play, Sci Fi, Fantasy -  Islamic terrorists use their religious ideology to promote and strengthen their causes. In order to counter this and establish rationality in religions a new ideology must be established. 17 pages - pdf, format 8)
Posted by: Dustin, October 2nd, 2014, 2:50am; Reply: 1
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Islamic terrorists use their religious ideology to promote and strengthen their causes. In order to counter this and establish rationality in religions a new ideology must be established.



There isn't any point telling us the definition of terrorist in your logline. The fact that Islamic Terrorists use ideology to promote and strengthen their cause goes without saying.

LOL. So, in order to counter one bullshit ideology we must create another that will establish rationality in all religions. Religions are not rational by default. They are created by crazy people who get other crazy people as followers. They're all crazy. Whether it's church and people passing out while filled with the holy spirits... sorry, spirit... or the crazy Muslims. They're all fucking nuts... and so are many atheists these days. I'm neither of them. I have no religion and I'm also not an atheist. I don't believe in any gods either. Anyway, the point is, that while religions exist, even if they had a new bullshit ideology, all (ALL) followers could never be rational people.

Also, stage plays are not really my thing. Which is why I don't have any interest in reading the script. Your logline says quite a lot already.
Posted by: LeeOConnor, November 7th, 2014, 8:13am; Reply: 2
Hi writer,

I read the first few pages, your format is not correct for stage play, I would recommend re-writing it.

Lee
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