Sweet Revenge by Robert Greeley - Adventure, Historical Romance - In 1860 Charleston, young woman raped at 17, seeks revenge at 20 and becomes embedded in romance, pirates, treachery, murder, brothels and two lovers.  126 pages - pdf, format 8)

Had me a little worried at first because it sounds very similar to one of my scripts... but, I'm fine now.

If you're around, I'll happily dissect a portion of your first page and let you know where you're going wrong. It's a great site to learn from if your skin is thick enough. If you're the type to run from hard work then this site definitely isn't for you. Many come... only a (relatively) few stay.