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Posted by: Don, December 4th, 2014, 8:05pm
The Color of Justice by Bryan Ugochukwu - Drama, Crime, Gangster - An ex detective, with a haunting past, now working for the Russian mob must find the one responsible for killing the mob boss. 108 pages - pdf, format 8)
Posted by: Ugo, December 7th, 2014, 5:07pm; Reply: 1
Thanks for the post
Posted by: dead by dawn, December 8th, 2014, 10:47am; Reply: 2
More Russians?  The logline isn't that good, either, Ugo.  Convince me to read this.  What makes Color of Justice different?  

(Note:  I did give the first 20 a fair shake)
Posted by: Ugo, December 8th, 2014, 5:13pm; Reply: 3
All right I'll work on it, thanks for the advice
Posted by: Ugo, December 8th, 2014, 5:14pm; Reply: 4
I didn't know Russians were out of style
Posted by: dead by dawn, December 9th, 2014, 2:15pm; Reply: 5
They just seem like they're in every action movie nowadays.  They were even the bad guys in The Equalizer, but I didn't care, because I thought that movie was awesome and it had a lot of other great stuff going for it.  A while back, I read a script on here called The Outsiders, and while it wasn't anything that blew my hair back, the fact that the writer took on The Yakuza - something I'm not familiar with - made it worth reading.  You don't really see many amateurs covering The Yakuza, it's always Italians and Russians.  It doesn't hurt to try something different.
Posted by: Ugo, December 9th, 2014, 5:06pm; Reply: 6
Makes senses, understood. Keep it in mind for the next one
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