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Posted by: Don, December 12th, 2014, 5:53pm

Outlaw Blood by Kevin M Glover - Horror, Western/Horror Hybrid - A ruthless outlaw and a rag-tag band of travelers join forces to destroy a blood-thirsty vampire wreaking havoc on an isolated Old West town. 121 pages - pdf, format 8)

Posted by: dead by dawn, December 12th, 2014, 8:37pm; Reply: 1

Damn no link....and this sounds like a badass script too.

Posted by: Don, December 12th, 2014, 11:22pm; Reply: 2

Fixed. Please try again.

Apologies.

-Don

Posted by: DustinBowcot (Guest), December 13th, 2014, 4:41am; Reply: 3

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A lightly armored SCOUT (20s) of the Royal Romanian Army swiftly and stealthily snakes down through the fog and brush, a small, silver crucifix glistening around his neck.

Try switching this around a little:

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A light-armored SCOUT (20s) of the Royal Romanian Army, a small, silver crucifix glistening around his neck, snakes stealthily through the fog and brush.

Try not to separate descriptions... don't jump from one to another. Describe one thing, then move onto the next. If you show up and participate around here, I may even read some more.

Good luck.

Posted by: TonyDionisio, December 15th, 2014, 5:58pm; Reply: 4

Anyone else seeing the dialog surrounded by this: < >? If so, is that a new format?

Tony

Posted by: dead by dawn, December 15th, 2014, 9:27pm; Reply: 5

It's what he came up with for the subtitled dialogue.