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Posted by: Don, January 7th, 2015, 5:47pm
Asphyxia by Adam Dave - Drama, Thriller - ASPHYXIA tells the story of a psychiatrist who wakes up next to the dead body of a former patient and finds he has no memory of the events leading up to her death. 94 pages - pdf, format 8)
Posted by: TheReccher, January 8th, 2015, 5:14am; Reply: 1
I usually hate it when a script starts out with a flashback, but given the nature of the premise I'll let it slide. The story and dialogue don't seem too bad. I'm interested in seeing what's going to happen. Although some of Swanson's dialogue might be a touch too awkwardly wordy. I get the feeling an actor might have a hard time pulling it off, but aside from that there's nothing blatantly bad popping out so far.

I'll give it a read.
Posted by: AdamDave, September 11th, 2018, 5:43pm; Reply: 2
Much appreciated. Hope you enjoy. It's one of my best works to date.
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