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Posted by: Don, January 13th, 2015, 5:59pm
Good Ol' Banking by Lope Labiyi - Comedy - An entertaining comedy about a nineteen year old that gets a job at a bank and uses his employment to help run a bank scam that targets vulnerable old people. 119 pages - pdf, format 8)
Posted by: AdrianWollaston, March 24th, 2015, 2:02am; Reply: 1

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As peter grew closer he started to realize that the sirens came from his house.
PETER
Mom where's dad?
THE CAMERA FOLLOWS DOWN TOWARDS AN OLD MAN LYING ON A STRETCHER GETTING CARRIED TOWARDS THE AMBULANCE.
Peter looks shocked then scene skips to hospital where nurses are rushing peters father down the aisle on a stretcher

Do a search and replace  on the document for peter and replace with Peter.
What's with the ALL CAPS?
The scene didn't skip. It's a new scene.
Scenes start with INT. or EXT. for Internal or External. Then the place the action takes place. then whether it is DAY or NIGHT

INT. CITY STREET - DAY.

You should either get a software package that will format a script for you or do a Google search on "How to format a screenplay" there are so many sites that will give you free information it's waste of your time to not do it to some sort of industry standard.
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