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Posted by: Don, March 8th, 2015, 10:05am

The Apocalypticians by David Sternfeld - Action, Adventure - When two alien empires attempt to destroy all life on Earth, can the Apocalypticians save the planet? 106 pages - pdf, format 8)

Posted by: TonyDionisio, March 11th, 2015, 8:49pm; Reply: 1

David,

Are you sure this shouldn't have been posted in Sci fi? Anyway, this is classic over-detailing or overwritten material such as the 400 watt light bulb reference. Title could use a rework and the writing blocks are long and confusing. Sure you don't have room to cut this up a bit?

Tony

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