H.O.A. by Eric Dickson - Thriller - A home owner's association security guard discovers a dead body near a patch of woods and, with the help of a fussy neighbor, infiltrates a rowdy house party in an effort to identify the person responsible. 81 pages - pdf, format 8)

Ok, up front without reading the spec:


* Page number1 must start at page 2 (not counting title page)
* Your scenes are too long; max three pages per scene heading
* There is to much dialog for an thriller/action movie
* The lenght of the paragraph looks good.
* The lenght of your spec is too short; a comedy 90-100 pages, all other full lenght screenplays inbetween 100-110