Housemates "The Clash" by Bridgette Poulton - Series, Comedy - Four Australian university students share a house and enjoy an alternative lifestyle with an innocent unawareness of how eccentric they all are. 23 pages - pdf, format 8)

Unless this is a shooting script I would take out the "CUT TO:" and the camera directions.  Unless it's imperative to the story which in most cases it's not.  Also adding in music tracks in not advisable.  It's best to just add something like "upbeat song plays in her ipod".  While the song might mean something to you it might not have the same effect for the reader.

Quoted Text INT. KITCHEN - MORNING Tanya back from her run makes a pot of coffee. She turns on the TV to watch CARTOONS and slumps on the sofa. HIGH ANGLE ON COFFEE MUG, thick tar-like brew

I find it strange that none of main characters speak until page 7.