The Chimes by David Wagner - Sci Fi, Fantasy - When an elderly porter loses his faith in mankind, the supernatural occupants of a bell tower work to restore his hope. Adapted from the story by Charles Dickens. 90 pages - pdf, format 8)

David,

Finely written adaptation of a story. Unfortunately, I don't think this works in screenplay format. For one,  it's incredibly overwritten. Between the narrative and the lack of anything happening to start,  I got bored. Maybe it's me, I dunno.

Gl,

Tony.