Wishful Dragon*Con by Kerri Shannon - Sci Fi, Fantasy - Going to Dragon*Con? If so, what if you encountered two genies, a sorcerer and a villianess set on vengence? Hope you got your wishes ready for this magical story. 130 pages - pdf, format 8)

Ladies,

Congrats on writing a full feature. I'm sure you are expecting critique on the events in your story, but...

I think you have a few major things to work out first.

1. You need to research the proper use of the comma.

2. Look up the proper format for introducing characters.

3. Identify you genre. This screams comedy.

Gl with the script,

Tony