Autumn Dogs by Steve Miles - Drama, WW I - As a wave of dissent threatens to engulf the Western Front, a conflicted Redcap clashes with a vengeful Captain over orders to track down and assassinate a group of mutineers.  91 pages - pdf, format 8)

Glad to finally see this up, Steve. You know how much I enjoyed this on both occasions that I have previously read it, which is definitely saying something. There's really not many scripts that I would enjoy reading twice.

Want me to take another look at it for you?

Toby -- a number of minor changes, though the main story is still the same.  I fleshed out the conflict between Hansard and the Brigadier (p.11 and pp.73-4), hopefully gives a little more weight to their actions.  If you wanted to check those pages out?

For anyone else who might be interested I'm happy to return reads (features/shorts).  If anyone’s keen for an exchange just get in touch here or via PM.  

Steve.

Nice changes, Steve. Really not much for me to comment on, beside the single typo:

P. 11 -- "Then your questioning..." should be "you're".

Good stuff. Looking forward to hearing others' thoughts and comments :-)

And that's what I get for making last minute changes...

Thanks Toby. Let me know when your new drafts are ready.

Steve.