The Brooklyn Kid by Gregory Mandarano & Salvatore Capozucca - Dramedy - A rock and roll drummer born with supernatural good luck struggles to release his first album as he's blocked by crooked producers, dangerous criminals, and the obligations of his Italian family. 117 pages - pdf, format

Writer interested in feedback on this work

Hey Greg, nice to see you here on Simply Scripts.

I read the first dozen pages of this off-site for Greg.
He's a hard worker that's made a lot of noise on Scriptshadow.
Now, he's looking to network here on Simply Scripts.
I've exchanged reads with him in the past and never been disappointed with his notes.
He's inhumanely fast with thoughtful suggestions that helped me improve my scripts.

EDreamer

I didn't read the script. But I did open it. I would say, lose the CONT'D on the page breaks.

But the reason I opened this thread was because the title reminded me of one of my favorite Danny Kaye movies, that I saw as a kid on TV. The Kid From Brooklyn. https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=IVIu7blrO8g

Updated draft.