Avatars by G. Myles - Short, Sci Fi, Fantasy - Fanfic sequel to James Cameron's film. - pdf, format 8)

Hello there!

I took a quick glance at the script and the formatting is off, especially with the dialogue.

I would suggest to read more scripts and get a good feeling as to how to properly formatt the screenplay.

I don't know what it is about fanfics, but they don't get many reads here, that, along with the formatting issues will discourage people to properly inspect your screenplay.

Best of luck,
Luis