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Posted by: Don, June 7th, 2016, 4:31pm
The Miami Yacht Club by ShaDon Manigault - Action, Adventure, Crime - A cult leader, a hitman, a drug lord, and a serial killer all own yachts at the Miami Yacht Club. As their lives intertwine, the streets of Miami becomes their battlefield to gain wealth and power over the other. 109 pages - pdf format

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Posted by: cloroxmartini, June 8th, 2016, 10:05am; Reply: 1
Yeah, I don't know. The first few scenes are so over the top that there's no mystery about what this is going to be like. It feels tres preachy.
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