A Cirlcle of Life by Tyrone Cross - Thriller - It's a psychological thriller about a woman named Lacey in her 30s who lives in Los Angeles year 2011 and has a very abusive relationship and has recurring dreams of a little black girl named Annibele who lived in 1981 in Louisiana and has a abusive psychopathic step father who killed her. With the help of Lacy's psychologist she starts to unravel the meaning of these dreams and finds a truth that no one is meant to know. 98 pages - pdf, format 8)

Holy cow, what a logline.... this needs some work. I'd keep it under 30 words if possible.

Do yourself a favor and don't start your script with a dream sequence. This is sooooo cliché and waaay too frequently used in scripts.