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Posted by: Don, June 29th, 2016, 5:36pm

Tea for Two by Rutger Oosterhoff - Short, Black Comedy - There can be only one! 4 pages - pdf, format 8)

Posted by: Don, July 3rd, 2016, 7:03am; Reply: 1

Apparently the host site has changed their rules regarding linking. I'm hosting it locally and you can read it now.

Don

Posted by: cloroxmartini, July 3rd, 2016, 8:19am; Reply: 2

Montypythonish. Not funny for me. Typos or rather homonyms, like I was board reading this.

Posted by: RichardR, July 5th, 2016, 7:53am; Reply: 3

Rutger,

Some notes.

This one didn't quite get there. It wasn't clever or funny enough for me. Since I'm not familiar with Highlander characters, much was lost. Might work if in the end, Kurgan suddenly realizes he has no left to fight. damn.

Best
Richard

Posted by: Warren, July 7th, 2016, 10:38pm; Reply: 4

I thought most of page 1 was quite funny. Story was okay but not really much of one here.

As previously mentioned there are mistakes, you spelled "off" incorrectly every time in this script.

Needs another look over.

Posted by: vancety, July 13th, 2016, 11:49am; Reply: 5

Oke, thanks for the critics guys.

Posted by: cbead, July 15th, 2016, 11:52am; Reply: 6

aloud - should be allowed.

Posted by: DustinBowcot (Guest), July 15th, 2016, 3:39pm; Reply: 7

Not really my thing... Highlander is one of my all time favourite films. Must have watched it close to 100 times growing up. I did get the references... perhaps Highlander is just too dated for most people to care these days?

Comedy is subjective... good luck in finding an audience.

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