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Posted by: Don, July 31st, 2016, 8:37pm

Sugar Kane by Bradford Walton - Horror - A teenager fights to save the lives of her four friends from the clutches of a deranged family, as an ominous presence watches from the Sugar Cane, as one by one, they are systematically tortured and killed. 126 pages - pdf, format 8)

Posted by: TonyDionisio, August 1st, 2016, 7:54pm; Reply: 1

Eeek, this logline loves commas. let's open her up...

10 pages in (and a lot of commas) and nothing happens except they run out of gas!

gotta move quicker

Posted by: Busy Little Bee, February 14th, 2017, 10:36pm; Reply: 2

Hey, Bradford
I think you just under cut yourself in your log line. First, the teen is fighting to save his friends but you tell us “one by one” they all die. Also, 126 pages? Is this a first draft?

BLB

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