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Posted by: Don, October 29th, 2016, 8:50am
Circle of Faith by Robert McBride - Drama - A convicted felon turns to the church to make amends for his sins, but the sins he battles with are not the same sins he was convicted of. 93 pages - pdf, format

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Posted by: ChrisB, November 1st, 2016, 8:11pm; Reply: 1
The beginning is very confusing.  Your main character isn�t very well developed and he is too passive.  Underneath it all your script has a lot of potential.
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