A Henry Kind of Gift by Bruce Alway - Drama - A physiologically damaged middle-aged man struggles with his past and with the antagonistic vice-president of the ad agency as his first romance and creative genius blossoms. 59 pages - pdf, format

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The beginning is really good.  I love how you made us form a bond with Henry by making us experience the damaging childhood event that has made him into the man he is today.  I thought that the story needed more conflict though as I began to lose interest once you started to show him as an adult.