WoMAN of the Cloth by Robert McBride - Series, Drama, Pilot - Desperate for fame, a televangelist  and his family scramble to hide their secrets before entering the public eye - but will the the family hold together when they learn of their mother’s previous gender?  63 pages - pdf format

Writer interested in feedback on this work

I'm on page 25...and DAMN!

These people are fucked up and I love it!

Absolutely loved reading this! Once I started I literally couldn't stop.

Oh MY GOD!  This was A selected read for my class and We ALL loved this! So visual and vivid. The writer captured the tone of the story and... and everyone in this story, except AVERY,  is a piece of shit. It reminds us of ‘Shameless’... anywho, kudos to the writer — a few classmates would like to interview Robert if possible. USC baby!

What an odd discussion board.

The author (McBride) has posted two scripts. Has made zero posts on other scripts and has not responded to any comment.

"Jaime". Has made a total of two posts:

On this script - 12/18/2016.

Quoted Text Absolutely loved reading this! Once I started I literally couldn't stop.

And on Robert's other script on 12/19/2016

Quoted Text Great short! This is the 2nd piece of your work I've read so far and I really enjoy connecting with you characters and storylines.

That's Jaime's entire interaction with SS.  A total of 18 minutes online.

Along comes GetLazed.

Quoted Text Oh MY GOD!  This was A selected read for my class and We ALL loved this! So visual and vivid. The writer captured the tone of the story and... and everyone in this story, except AVERY,  is a piece of shit. It reminds us of ‘Shameless’... anywho, kudos to the writer — a few classmates would like to interview Robert if possible. USC baby!

Who has a total of one post (the above).

The script itself was posted over a year ago. The writer has found two huge fans who, ironically, only interested in his work. Hmmm.

Would love to hear Robert's feedback to them. I think they deserve a response - at least a thanks. As a note - I took a look at the first five - an error here and there but overall solid writing. Not at the OMG! level. But solid.

Code MS goes to a very specific location.

This isn't very specific. It would be better if the precise location was specified. I'm trying to picture this in my mind but then the image halts at this point... because I don't know where this specific place is.

Quoted from DustinBowcot Code MS goes to a very specific location. .

Dustin - what are you referencing here?