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Posted by: Don, December 22nd, 2016, 9:55am

End Of The Road by Toualith Meango - Sci Fi, Fantasy - Scientists are hunted by a murderous machine in what seems to be the beginning of World War 3. 140 pages - pdf, format

New writer interested in feedback on this work

Posted by: Female Gaze, December 29th, 2016, 8:43pm; Reply: 1

OK, so I don't usually comment on movie scripts but this caught my attention.

Not gonna lie there are some minor issues here but I am so enthralled in the plot line I don't actually care.

I wanna know what is going to happen. I'm on page 24 now and I got to that page fairly fast,

I have so many questions which is good for you. And it's funny. I will defiantly finish reading this flaws and all.

Good work.

Posted by: Female Gaze, December 29th, 2016, 8:45pm; Reply: 2

Oh shit it's Ping! Now I have to know what's going to happen.

Posted by: Toualith, January 13th, 2017, 4:53pm; Reply: 3

Thank you for your feedback. And sorry I took forever to reply (christmas season madness I suppose...) I'd love to know a little more about your thoughts.

Thanks again,

Toualith

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