Evil Karma by Warren Duncan - Short, Horror - An evil man pays for the sins of his past. 6 pages - pdf, format
*Original thread was accidentally deleted. Apologies.
- Don
Posted by: Warren, December 29th, 2016, 3:05am; Reply: 1
Sure I commented on this.
Just wanted to say thanks to all that read this and helped me with it months ago. You may or may not remember who you are.
Cheers
Posted by: RichardR, December 30th, 2016, 5:09pm; Reply: 2
Great job. Karma is a bitch
Best Richard
Posted by: Warren, December 30th, 2016, 6:32pm; Reply: 3
Haha.
Thanks, Richard.
Posted by: Zack, February 8th, 2017, 7:42pm; Reply: 4
Read the script before I watched the movie.
Well written, good pace. Some of the dialog was a little stale, mostly when Brad is talking to himself.
Pretty straight forward story. Man murders girl, girls ghost comes back for revenge. IMO this needs something more to punch it up. A twist or something.
Not a bad effort by any mean though. I just doubt it will stick with me for very long.
Now on to the movie...
Why was the actress smiling as she was getting strangled?
It was very well shot and lit. Excellent cinematography. Good editing too.
Congrats on getting it produced. :)
~Zack~
Posted by: Warren, February 9th, 2017, 2:45am; Reply: 5
Cheers Zack
I think it was the 3rd script I ever wrote so I agree it's nothing spectacular. It was really just a nod to some older type horrors (not that it plays out too horrific) and Dexter haha.
I think she is meant to look like she's struggling and her struggling face looks like she's smiling. I wondered the same thing when I watched it.