Maximum Potential by Marcus D Russell - Drama - An NCAA Division I track coach and serial womanizer is banned for life after his post meet freakout is caputured on video and goes viral. He’s given an opportunity to redeem himself by coaching a Jr. High girls track team in the elite world of Los Angeles private schools. 60 pages - pdf, format

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I thought this was a great story, well-done and easy to read.... right until the end. I thought it would be a better feature-length piece to see the hero arc.

I got the impression you were going somewhere but then you surprised me and didn't. I mean, I'm all for surprises, but his lack of arc bothered me and I really felt like you could have gone to some great, deep places with his character.

(This is my first post--I hope this is the acceptable way to post feedback.)