1439 Street by Xavierie Mbangtang - Series, Horror - A ghost hunter moves into a street where most of the residents are dead but nobody can tell who. The hunter's existence threatens the dead community and in the spirit of death, the dead want her dead too. 35 pages - pdf, format

Writer interested in feedback on this work

OK, so let me see if I can follow this.

Nic is a ghost hunter and she attends a school full of ghost?

And the ghost are just treated as normal students?

This just screams ANIME. And in that context could work very well. I need clearer info on this one in order to understand what I'm looking at and so I can give notes effectively.

Interesting though.

Oh, I remember you, HIRED GUNS from awhile back.  

Thanks for reading. And you nailed the premise of the series. I can see how it could be anime. If you have anymore thoughts on my mistakes and how I can improve my work, please let me know.