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SimplyScripts Screenwriting Discussion Board / Screenwriting Class / 45 ways to avoid 'very' in a sentence.
Posted by: Female Gaze, February 12th, 2017, 2:28pm
Posted by: Zack, February 12th, 2017, 6:50pm; Reply: 1
Pretty interesting. I definitely need help with my action lines. I feel like I over writer them and they grow repetitive. I'm gonna study this list and expand my vocabulary. ;D
~Zack~
Posted by: eldave1, February 14th, 2017, 9:09pm; Reply: 2
Posted by: Don, February 14th, 2017, 9:44pm; Reply: 3
Using 'very' weakens the sentence. Try these instead. |
I see nothing but a broken image. Is it just me?
- Don
Posted by: Zack, February 14th, 2017, 9:47pm; Reply: 4
I see the intended image.
~Zack~
Posted by: Female Gaze, February 14th, 2017, 9:51pm; Reply: 5
i see it too?
hmmm...it could be your cookie settings
Posted by: Don, February 14th, 2017, 11:17pm; Reply: 6
i see it too?
hmmm...it could be your cookie settings |
It was my browser settings. I see it now.
- Don
Posted by: TonyDionisio, February 16th, 2017, 6:28am; Reply: 7
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