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Posted by: Don, March 19th, 2017, 5:59pm

Therapist by Ba Kiwanuka - Short, Horror - A routine kill for a serial killer turns out to be anything but. - pdf, format

Writer interested in feedback on this work

Posted by: eldave1, March 22nd, 2017, 3:58pm; Reply: 1

Not a huge fan of the story - not my genre .However thought it was well written and it had me turning pages till the end. Nice work.

Posted by: Ba, March 27th, 2017, 4:00am; Reply: 2

Thanks for the review eldave1. Sorry about the tardy reply but I'm upcountry in Uganda on community health issues so I've rarely got time these days to get online...that is if I can find access in these remote villages.

Anyway, cheers.

Posted by: eldave1, March 27th, 2017, 9:32am; Reply: 3

You are more than welcome. Hope your health improves

Posted by: Ba, March 30th, 2017, 3:59am; Reply: 4

Oh my health is fine, I'm doing community outreach health services...but thanks anyway. Lol

Posted by: eldave1, March 30th, 2017, 9:43am; Reply: 5

Quoted from Ba
Oh my health is fine, I'm doing community outreach health services...but thanks anyway. Lol

Good to hear

Posted by: RichardR, March 31st, 2017, 10:44am; Reply: 6

Some notes.

Not a bad tale. A little telegraphic but hidden for the most part. Works for me.

Best
Richard

Posted by: Ba, April 2nd, 2017, 6:04am; Reply: 7

Thanks Richard.

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