Jurassic World (Rewritten Screenplay) by Nick Romantini - Action, Adventure - Jurassic World is example of film being a mixed bag in my opinion. Despite have some fun action scenes, decent performances and a pretty cool looking park, the film suffered from a weak story with pointless subplots, motiveless characters, a stereotypical villain, and way too much CGI in scenes that could've used practical effects. While I do think it's better than The Lost World: Jurassic Park and Jurassic Park III, it's nowhere near on the same level as the original film. So, after having recently re-watched Jurassic World, I decided to fix its plot and characters by doing a rewrite of the screenplay. - pdf, format

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