Discount Hero Protection - Pilot by Xavier Gonzalez - Series, Comedy - A mockumentary style comedy that follows an insurance office and its employees that specialize in covering damages caused by superheroes. 33 pages - pdf, format

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This sounds like the old Marvel Comic 'Damage Control'. I'll read it when I get a chance and let you know my thoughts.

I found this quite funny and quirky. It moved quite quick. I was never bored through the 33 pages. I could see this as a nice little Netflix series. The insurance staff were quite interesting. Might be worth sending off for a coverage report.
I know this is a first draft but there were a few spelling mistakes. I don't know how the footage style would play out, they're may be too many talking heads.