Cosmic Brothers by Ryan Peters - Action, Adventure - When four teens with incrediable superpowers must unite to stop a enemy known as X. 95 pages - pdf, format

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I think you need to take the time and correct the script before putting it out.  The whole script is riddled with no capital letters, punctuation, grammar and odd spacing.

When four teens with incrediable superpowers must unite to stop a enemy known as X... [Then what must they do before what happens?]

Ryan - the opening page is a train wreck from a format and grammar perspective - it's not close.  You are going to lose readers on page 1. This one is not ready I'm afraid.

Missing a title page.

Instead of "Protected by copyright" try "COPYRIGHT (c) year"

EXT. CHICAGO CITY HALL - DAY which means the camera (and me) are outside. However a helicopter flies by and I can hear the pilots talking. How can this be even possible without an INT. HELICOPTER?

Drop the WE SEEs and many INGs.

I can see a STORY developing but a rewrite is needed to clean up the spelling and grammar so it will read easier.

Good luck to you.