The Dragon Never Dies

Posted by: Don, July 15th, 2017, 8:26am

The Dragon Never Dies by Farzin Youabian - Action, Adventure - The gold gets stolen from Chinese government along with drug dealers introductions with police officers and after all the killings assassinations with the help of police gets returned to Chinese government. 103 pages - pdf, format

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Posted by: Cacutshaw, July 15th, 2017, 9:04am; Reply: 1

After reading page one I can't help but think this is the greatest thing I've ever read.

Posted by: Heretic, July 15th, 2017, 11:24am; Reply: 2

John Lion is the hero we all need. A jewelry-mart robbing, cocaine-snorting, whiskey-drinking, kung-fu fighting single man who thinks about gold all the time and longs to live in a better world.

Posted by: TonyDionisio, July 19th, 2017, 11:28am; Reply: 3

Quoted from Heretic

John Lion is the hero we all need. A jewelry-mart robbing, cocaine-snorting, whiskey-drinking, kung-fu fighting single man who thinks about gold all the time and longs to live in a better world.

I'll drink to that!

Posted by: ajr, July 19th, 2017, 11:50am; Reply: 4

Thank you guys for bumping it. This HAS to be filmed. Paging Tommy Wiseau...

Posted by: eldave1, July 19th, 2017, 11:56am; Reply: 5

Farzin:

You need to take a look at some scripts or do some Google work.

This is riddled with errors - format, grammar, typos, unfilmables. It is not near ready.

Posted by: ajr, July 19th, 2017, 12:20pm; Reply: 6

Quoted from Heretic

John Lion is the hero we all need. A jewelry-mart robbing, cocaine-snorting, whiskey-drinking, kung-fu fighting single man who thinks about gold all the time and longs to live in a better world.

HUGE SPOILER ALERT

Dude I hate to break it to you but John Lion dies on page 9...

Posted by: Cacutshaw, July 19th, 2017, 1:02pm; Reply: 7

If I was a rich man I would be filming this right now.

And Farzin would be a billionaire.

Posted by: FMLS, July 20th, 2017, 8:28pm; Reply: 8

You guys are terrible lol

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The (65) years old Chinese woman by the name of MAY-CHAW is
partner in crime with John Lion she’s a single woman that
knows kung-fu very well. She’s terrifying where her beard
did not conceal it.

No one can say that's not awesome.

Posted by: Cacutshaw, July 29th, 2017, 12:43am; Reply: 9

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42 INT. RESTAURANT - DAY
Boss-Boy is sitting at a corner table at the rear of the
restaurant, clasping water glass in right hand, his left
hand fists on his thigh.
Now and then he takes a sip of water, and each sip seemes
colder than the one before it, as if the glass absorbs a
chill, instead of heat, from his hand.
CUT-TO

I could read this script every day for the rest of my life and still find something new I love every time.

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