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Posted by: Don, September 10th, 2017, 3:30pm
The Nines by Leo Birchley-Brun - Horror - The Nines is a slasher horror about the members of a very exclusive high school clique who go on a weekend away to a secluded manor house and find themselves unwillingly having to survive against an unknown killer with an unclear motive.  93 pages - pdf, format

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Posted by: Tyler King, September 10th, 2017, 5:37pm; Reply: 1
Your logline makes this sound like just another run of the mill, been there done that, slasher flick... one that's been done to death. Are slashers even still a thing anymore? Haven't seen a new one in forever, sad too, they used to be my favorite... anyway I decided to check this out... and couldn't get past page 3, sorry... there were quite a bit of formatting/grammar issues, and well... yeah, not a good start for a reader, IMO... I'm sorry, though, best of luck man!
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