The House of Krazees by Bruce Karima - Series, Comedy - A young couple who are like a brother and sister to their kids struggles to shape their lives from coming rebellious. 39 pages - pdf, format

New writer interested in feedback on this work

Bruce,

Congratulations on finishing your screenplay.

Just a few suggestions and opinions.

Formatting:
Did you write this with screenwriting software?
I ask this because it looks like there is many issues regarding spacing and capitalization throughout your script.
There are some decent free screenwriting software out there, Celtx, FadeIn and WriterDuet to name a few.
That should help fix some of those issues.
Examples:
The dialogue looks double or triple spaced.
The action is all capitalized. It shouldn't be. It's hard on the eyes.
You do not need to capitalize a parenthetical.

Headers:
I'd suggest you remove your header.
The House of Krazees
"Semi-Cheating"
It is unnecessary to see this on top of every page.

Best of luck to you with your current and future projects.

All the best,
Marty