Stitches by Sammy Caps - Short, Thriller - After  bank heist gone wrong, the gang reconvenes, yet wrath and greed drive them apart. 7 pages - pdf, format

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Interesting twists in this script. At first it came off a lot like Reservoir Dogs. I think it's cool but the robbers turning against each other after the robbery thing is just too familiar. The dialogue is pretty good in my opinion. Keep writing. You got talent.