Sugarcane by Adam Lennon - Short, Drama - A middle-aged man travels to a storage facility to retrieve his stolen safe and soon discovers that the owner of the facility has much darker plans in store for him.  11 pages - pdf, format

Writer interested in feedback on this work

Adam,

Heavy topic to take on.

Nice pace that builds.

I liked the action, style and dialogue.

Roosevelt was a cool character. I could picture him easily.

Nice twist. I wasn't expecting that.

Good work. Keep writing.

Best of luck to you with your current and future projects.

All the best,
Marty