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Posted by: Don, January 10th, 2018, 5:45pm
10 Years Removed by Paul Reynolds - Drama - An everyman awakes one morning and is shocked to discover that the time is now ten years in the future and he struggles to rebuild his memory of the past decade. 110 pages - pdf, format

Writer interested in feedback on this work

Posted by: eldave1, January 12th, 2018, 8:43pm; Reply: 1
Hey, Paul:

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INT. SUBURBAN GARAGE - DAY - 1999

A garage door opens from inside, full size new SUV pulls in,
a handsome man in his late thirties and dressed in an
expensive suit gets out.

This is TIM SULLIVAN.

He notices the clutter in the room, he’s been ignoring it for
some time now.

TIM
(to himself)
I've got to clean this place up.

He walks out the garage door, notices a small ding on his
right back quarter panel, shakes his head.

TIM
Damn it, at least leave a note or
something.

Tim walks to a super mailbox at the corner, encounters


You went from inside the garage (INT) to outside the garage (EXT) without a new scene heading. One is needed.
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