Free, Free, Free? by Abhishek Anand - Short, Drama - Liberal Indian young man caught in freedom of speech in order to abide the rules and regulations set by the political party and the supporting mass. His post on public forum about a current affair leads him in trouble. His journey through that gives us an insight about the times we live in and have to fit in the crowd around to have a surviving place. 9 pages - pdf, format

Writer interested in feedback on this work

Hey Abhishek

If you are genuinely interested in becoming a screenwriter then you need to use the proper format, and this I'm afraid is really just written as a short story with a few Fade Ins thrown in for good measure.

Read some of the scripts on here to see what a script should be formatted like and try again.