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Posted by: Mr. Blonde, March 30th, 2018, 9:51am
Well, you've all survived this long and congratulations goes out to all of you. But, it's time for week 3, otherwise known as "The Trifecta". In this round, you will all be writing three 1-page shorts. In addition to this, each short will be of a different genre. The scripts will be scored on a range of 1-5. If a script isn't entered, you'd get an automatic zero for that script so, at least, enter something. Good luck to you all.

Please submit to SimplyScripts.com/OWC

Warren
vs.
MarkItZero

stevie
vs.
eldave1

AnthonyCawood
vs.
PKCardinal

RJP
vs.
Stumpzian
Posted by: AnthonyCawood, March 30th, 2018, 11:19am; Reply: 1
Is there a missing number there?

1 - X page shorts... or do you really mean 1 page?

Posted by: PKCardinal, March 30th, 2018, 11:26am; Reply: 2
Is this the full assignment? Do I start writing now? Or, am I about to get a separate email explaining the scripts must be in disappearing ink, written right to left and include 7 characters, all named Jean?
Posted by: DanC, March 30th, 2018, 11:35am; Reply: 3
I think you have to wait for your email because the match ups have to be assigned and then the genre etc.  So, I'd hold off till the clock gets announced.

Dan
Posted by: PKCardinal, March 30th, 2018, 11:36am; Reply: 4
So... the disappearing ink thing. Gotcha.

For some reason, this message felt different.
Posted by: eldave1, March 30th, 2018, 4:00pm; Reply: 5

Quoted from Mr. Blonde
Well, you've all survived this long and congratulations goes out to all of you. But, it's time for week 3, otherwise known as "The Trifecta". In this round, you will all be writing three 1-page shorts. In addition to this, each short will be of a different genre. The scripts will be scored on a range of 1-5. If a script isn't entered, you'd get an automatic zero for that script so, at least, enter something. Good luck to you all.


Is this the extent of the requirement - three one page scripts?

When are they due?
Posted by: Warren, March 30th, 2018, 4:06pm; Reply: 6

Quoted from Mr. Blonde
Well, you've all survived this long and congratulations goes out to all of you. But, it's time for week 3, otherwise known as "The Trifecta". In this round, you will all be writing three 1-page shorts. In addition to this, each short will be of a different genre. The scripts will be scored on a range of 1-5. If a script isn't entered, you'd get an automatic zero for that script so, at least, enter something. Good luck to you all.


Has to be more info I imagine?

I love a one pager, not sure I'm creative enough to think of 3 in one sitting.

Will be fun but tough.
Posted by: FrankM, March 30th, 2018, 4:10pm; Reply: 7

Quoted from eldave1


Is this the extent of the requirement - three one page scripts?

When are they due?


Is sounded to me like each pair would be assigned three genres, so watch your PM box.

Something like Romanian soap opera, Zoroastrianism faith-based, and a horror trilogy (you still have to fit it on one page).
Posted by: AnthonyCawood, March 30th, 2018, 4:14pm; Reply: 8
I'm still hoping it's a typo and Sean meant to type 1-5 pages
Posted by: FrankM, March 30th, 2018, 5:22pm; Reply: 9

Quoted from AnthonyCawood
I'm still hoping it's a typo and Sean meant to type 1-5 pages


I think 1-page was intentional. Though he never specified the page size ;)
Posted by: AnthonyCawood, March 30th, 2018, 5:33pm; Reply: 10
Or the font or margin sizes!
Posted by: Mr. Blonde, March 30th, 2018, 5:55pm; Reply: 11
Exactly what I said. Three 1-page shorts. Different genre for each. Finish by 11:59PM on Sunday. Same timeline as the other rounds.

No other rules.
Posted by: AnthonyCawood, March 30th, 2018, 5:57pm; Reply: 12
So just to treble clarify... you aren't assigning genres to us, so we wont be getting PMs?
Posted by: Mr. Blonde, March 30th, 2018, 6:00pm; Reply: 13
Exactly. And nobody will know whose scripts are whose... except your own.
Posted by: AnthonyCawood, March 30th, 2018, 6:03pm; Reply: 14
Thanks Sean
Posted by: LC, March 30th, 2018, 6:08pm; Reply: 15
Ooh, this'll be interesting. :D
Posted by: Stumpzian, March 30th, 2018, 6:56pm; Reply: 16
Am I out or in? I have no idea.

Until I hear otherwise, I'll assume I'm out.
Posted by: Don, March 30th, 2018, 8:37pm; Reply: 17

Quoted from Stumpzian
Am I out or in? I have no idea.

Until I hear otherwise, I'll assume I'm out.


Sorry, Henry.  You are in.   I think Khamanna will agree as she fell on her sword before the voting closed officially (unless Sean sez otherwise).  

Don
Posted by: Stumpzian, March 30th, 2018, 8:50pm; Reply: 18

Quoted from Don


Sorry, Henry.  You are in.   I think Khamanna will agree as she fell on her sword before the voting closed officially (unless Sean sez otherwise).  

Don


Okay, thank you. Am turning in, hoping to dream of three scripts I can write tomorrow.
Posted by: khamanna, March 30th, 2018, 8:52pm; Reply: 19

Quoted from Don


Sorry, Henry.  You are in.   I think Khamanna will agree as she fell on her sword before the voting closed officially (unless Sean sez otherwise).  

Don


Yep, exactly, congrats Stump! Sorry that wasn't clear, in my head it was, lol.
Posted by: stevie, March 30th, 2018, 9:15pm; Reply: 20
Oh so there’s no theme or anything? No criteria at all except for one page?  That means we could write any old rubbish and it will be meaningless lol.  
Posted by: khamanna, March 30th, 2018, 9:21pm; Reply: 21
How will you submt - in one file? just curious, I'm not submitting to this myself.
Posted by: FrankM, March 30th, 2018, 9:57pm; Reply: 22

Quoted from khamanna
How will you submt - in one file? just curious, I'm not submitting to this myself.


My guess (also not submitting) is that the three scripts live independently, and readers scoring them wouldn't be told that those three were related.
Posted by: khamanna, March 30th, 2018, 10:02pm; Reply: 23

Quoted from FrankM


My guess (also not submitting) is that the three scripts live independently, and readers scoring them wouldn't be told that those three were related.


Oo, crazy wild mess, I like that!
Posted by: RJP, March 30th, 2018, 10:07pm; Reply: 24
I don't know how they will organize this. They will tally all of the scores on one script vs. all of the scores on the other? How do you solve the issue of a script having more people score it than the other? Last round some pairings were voted on by more people.
Posted by: Mr. Blonde, March 30th, 2018, 10:26pm; Reply: 25

Quoted from RJP
I don't know how they will organize this. They will tally all of the scores on one script vs. all of the scores on the other? How do you solve the issue of a script having more people score it than the other? Last round some pairings were voted on by more people.


In order to make things really hard on myself, I will be averaging all your scores, using my MP scorecard. Highest average score moves on. That's why you are strongly encouraged to write all three scripts.
Posted by: PKCardinal, March 30th, 2018, 10:26pm; Reply: 26
Is this the final round?
Posted by: Mr. Blonde, March 30th, 2018, 10:30pm; Reply: 27

Quoted from PKCardinal
Is this the final round?


3 out of 5.
Posted by: RJP, March 30th, 2018, 11:10pm; Reply: 28

Quoted from Mr. Blonde


In order to make things really hard on myself, I will be averaging all your scores, using my MP scorecard. Highest average score moves on. That's why you are strongly encouraged to write all three scripts.


I guess that works...ish. There will be lots of randomness. Scripts with catchy titles will be viewed and voted on more. Scripts with only 7 votes will be averaged vs scripts with 15-20. Makes a little difference. Also some harsh critics think every script is a 1/5. Those people will vote on some and not others. Everyone they didn't vote on will dodge a bullet.
Posted by: FrankM, March 30th, 2018, 11:50pm; Reply: 29

Quoted from RJP
I guess that works...ish. There will be lots of randomness. Scripts with catchy titles will be viewed and voted on more. Scripts with only 7 votes will be averaged vs scripts with 15-20. Makes a little difference. Also some harsh critics think every script is a 1/5. Those people will vote on some and not others. Everyone they didn't vote on will dodge a bullet.


There is a way to handle that, but Sean is making this hard on himself already.

(Basically you calculate the mean and standard deviation of scores by a particular rater, and normalize all of their scores. Then it wouldn't matter if they gave mostly 1s and a 3, or mostly 3s and a 5.)

Better to have people honestly evaluate all of the scripts. If the board can do ratings, then each writer just silently gives their own stuff 5s. If not, Sean can add those in at the end or not, it wouldn't make a difference.
Posted by: Warren, March 31st, 2018, 12:01am; Reply: 30

Quoted from FrankM


Better to have people honestly evaluate all of the scripts.


Great idea in a perfect world but I don't think this will happen, I guarantee some great scripts will get really low scores and it will get put down to personal preference.



Posted by: eldave1, March 31st, 2018, 12:12am; Reply: 31

Quoted from FrankM


There is a way to handle that, but Sean is making this hard on himself already.

(Basically you calculate the mean and standard deviation of scores by a particular rater, and normalize all of their scores. Then it wouldn't matter if they gave mostly 1s and a 3, or mostly 3s and a 5.)

Better to have people honestly evaluate all of the scripts. If the board can do ratings, then each writer just silently gives their own stuff 5s. If not, Sean can add those in at the end or not, it wouldn't make a difference.


All due respect, but this is a writing exercise not an Oscar nomination. Is is the case with all of our challenges we trust each other to act in good faith. If somehow someone doesn't the consequence is unimportant in the grand scheme of things.
Posted by: Warren, March 31st, 2018, 12:55am; Reply: 32
One down.

It's not great but it will have to do.
Posted by: FrankM, March 31st, 2018, 6:40am; Reply: 33

Quoted from Warren
One down.

It's not great but it will have to do.


So we should be on the lookout for a psychological thriller about manipulating scores in the 2018 Writer’s Tournament? ;)

Just kidding. Kudos for getting this far and getting it done.
Posted by: PrussianMosby, March 31st, 2018, 8:46am; Reply: 34
One pagers, three of them for each contestant… well, if that's not the supreme discipline, haha.

No, seriously looking forward what you come up with. I love the shorts short.

I just made a list who's still in because it's hard to overview where and what, searched a while myself.

So as I see it, the quarter-finalists are:


Stumpzian
AnthonyCawood
PKCardinal
MarkItZero
Warren
RJP
stevie
eldave1



Good luck and have a happy Easter holidays with few but effective writing, shouted from the sideline.
Posted by: Stumpzian, March 31st, 2018, 10:24am; Reply: 35
I have a parameter suggestion for this round.

Since these are one-pagers, they should be just that. One page only. No going over to Page 2, not even a few lines.

Henry
Posted by: eldave1, March 31st, 2018, 10:27am; Reply: 36

Quoted from PrussianMosby
One pagers, three of them for each contestant… well, if that's not the supreme discipline, haha.

No, seriously looking forward what you come up with. I love the shorts short.

I just made a list who's still in because it's hard to overview where and what, searched a while myself.

So as I see it, the quarter-finalists are:


Stumpzian
AnthonyCawood
PKCardinal
MarkItZero
Warren
RJP
stevie
eldave1



Good luck and have a happy Easter holidays with few but effective writing, shouted from the sideline.


Thanks, buddy
Posted by: khamanna, March 31st, 2018, 12:18pm; Reply: 37

Quoted from Stumpzian
I have a parameter suggestion for this round.

Since these are one-pagers, they should be just that. One page only. No going over to Page 2, not even a few lines.

Henry


Well, I'm not writing but there was a one-page challenge back at MP (another site) and if anyone ever went over a page he would be automatically disqualified. I think it was a fair practice.
Posted by: MarkItZero, March 31st, 2018, 12:23pm; Reply: 38
This is so much less work, I'm lovin' it! Almost done with number two.

No idea if they're actually any good but that's what cash bribes are for.
Posted by: RJP, March 31st, 2018, 12:31pm; Reply: 39

Quoted from Stumpzian
I have a parameter suggestion for this round.

Since these are one-pagers, they should be just that. One page only. No going over to Page 2, not even a few lines.

Henry


What kind of scumbag would go over the page limit?
Posted by: jayrex, March 31st, 2018, 12:34pm; Reply: 40

Quoted from khamanna


Well, I'm not writing but there was a one-page challenge back at MP (another site) and if anyone ever went over a page he would be automatically disqualified. I think it was a fair practice.


It was hardcore, I once wrote the words 'The End' on the sixth page, got disqualified.
Posted by: AnthonyCawood, March 31st, 2018, 1:44pm; Reply: 41
Three done, I'm just gonna keep writing them until I run out of ideas and post the 'best' three.
Posted by: Mr. Blonde, March 31st, 2018, 2:08pm; Reply: 42

Quoted from AnthonyCawood
Three done, I'm just gonna keep writing them until I run out of ideas and post the 'best' three.


Different genres?...
Posted by: AnthonyCawood, March 31st, 2018, 2:36pm; Reply: 43
First three are, my fourth is a repeat so will have to pick one...

I'm surprised no one has asked yet... so I will, sub genres... horror and horror-comedy, one genre or two?  
Posted by: PKCardinal, March 31st, 2018, 2:45pm; Reply: 44

Quoted from AnthonyCawood
First three are, my fourth is a repeat so will have to pick one...

I'm surprised no one has asked yet... so I will, sub genres... horror and horror-comedy, one genre or two?  


Was wondering myself, so I'm going 3 distinct genres, just to be safe.

Punted a pretty good overall concept, too, in the abundance of caution.
Posted by: eldave1, March 31st, 2018, 3:32pm; Reply: 45
Okay dokay - blew out three - booked all day tomorrow - going to submit now.

Best of luck to all.
Posted by: PrussianMosby, March 31st, 2018, 3:38pm; Reply: 46
Dave, Anthony and Warren I would have bet my money on to be here. You're all stable; don't see it in a negative sense.

James is the lone favorite.

Stumpz and Stevie is wildcard, I hope they cause havoc.

Cardinal and RJP I don't know yet

shouted from the sideline
Posted by: eldave1, March 31st, 2018, 3:49pm; Reply: 47

Quoted from PrussianMosby
Dave, Anthony and Warren I would have bet my money on to be here. You're all stable; don't see it in a negative sense.

James is the lone favorite.

Stumpz and Stevie is wildcard, I hope they cause havoc.

Cardinal and RJP I don't know yet

shouted from the sideline


Thanks, mate.  I certainly don't mind being stable.

Some of my favorite writers got bracketed together - bad draw. In each round there were several scripts that, in a vacuum, were certainly good enough to move on but they happened to be up against an equally strong script.
Posted by: AnthonyCawood, March 31st, 2018, 3:56pm; Reply: 48
Thanks Prussian, happy to be stable ;-)

I'm enjoying the challenge and writing shorts again...  

Don;t think I'll get past this round but happy to have made it this far,
Posted by: Warren, March 31st, 2018, 4:07pm; Reply: 49

Quoted from PrussianMosby
Dave, Anthony and Warren I would have bet my money on to be here. You're all stable; don't see it in a negative sense.

James is the lone favorite.

Stumpz and Stevie is wildcard, I hope they cause havoc.

Cardinal and RJP I don't know yet

shouted from the sideline


Not entirely sure what stable means, but if Dave and Anthony are in that bracket I'll take it.

Thanks, Alex.

Posted by: AnthonyCawood, March 31st, 2018, 4:13pm; Reply: 50
Perhaps Alex meant staple?
Posted by: PrussianMosby, March 31st, 2018, 4:14pm; Reply: 51
Hey hey, stable to me means sovereign, reliable. In other words, you write on a level that is screenwriter all-day level; I must correct; you act as engaged all-day screenwriter ---
Posted by: MarkItZero, March 31st, 2018, 4:19pm; Reply: 52
Me? I'm the favorite? Whoever told you that I think was playing some sort of sick practical joke lol.
Posted by: PrussianMosby, March 31st, 2018, 4:27pm; Reply: 53
Yes, to me you are the favorite.
Posted by: PrussianMosby, March 31st, 2018, 5:38pm; Reply: 54
Khamanna was on the list too. She took herself back; unexpected move, I think.

Whatever… All stable :-) now.
Posted by: Warren, March 31st, 2018, 5:44pm; Reply: 55
Number two is in the bag.

I'm really struggling this round, I think it might be the end of me.
Posted by: AnthonyCawood, March 31st, 2018, 5:45pm; Reply: 56
Written six, now time for a break!
Posted by: PrussianMosby, March 31st, 2018, 5:52pm; Reply: 57
One page is hard. In the end you're already winners. If you'd want an advice: feelings. Focus on feelings.
Posted by: Warren, March 31st, 2018, 5:52pm; Reply: 58

Quoted from AnthonyCawood
Written six, now time for a break!


I hate you so much right now!

Can you email me the worst one? I'll use it.
Posted by: Warren, March 31st, 2018, 5:56pm; Reply: 59
The bigger issue is 3 loglines.

They almost seem pointless for one page.
Posted by: LC, March 31st, 2018, 5:58pm; Reply: 60

Quoted from jayrex
It was hardcore, I once wrote the words 'The End' on the sixth page, got disqualified.

I'm assuming Javier, that you wrote The End on the next page not the sixth?  :D

P.S. I wrote two one-pagers in my sleep last night just for the challenge. A cinch, right?   ;D
Posted by: AnthonyCawood, March 31st, 2018, 6:06pm; Reply: 61
Agree Warren, do we need loglines for one pagers... they could actually spoil the stories... and no ;-)
Posted by: eldave1, March 31st, 2018, 6:09pm; Reply: 62

Quoted from PrussianMosby
One page is hard. In the end you're already winners. If you'd want an advice: feelings. Focus on feelings.


Not quite feeling that :)
Posted by: PrussianMosby, March 31st, 2018, 6:27pm; Reply: 63

Quoted from eldave1


Not quite feeling that :)


Call me Coach Carter :-) . You will evoke feelings.
Posted by: FrankM, March 31st, 2018, 7:54pm; Reply: 64
Use the logline as exposition to establish the setting, save a precious line or two in your script.
Posted by: Warren, March 31st, 2018, 8:02pm; Reply: 65
Okay, I've got 3 entries.
Posted by: eldave1, March 31st, 2018, 8:03pm; Reply: 66

Quoted from Warren
Okay, I've got 3 entries.


Atta boy - good luck!
Posted by: Warren, March 31st, 2018, 8:43pm; Reply: 67

Quoted from eldave1


Atta boy - good luck!


Haha no promises on the quality.

Good luck, Dave.

Good luck to everyone.
Posted by: eldave1, March 31st, 2018, 8:49pm; Reply: 68

Quoted from Warren


Haha no promises on the quality.

Good luck, Dave.

Good luck to everyone.


Gracias
Posted by: DanC, March 31st, 2018, 11:34pm; Reply: 69

Quoted from PrussianMosby
One page is hard. In the end you're already winners. If you'd want an advice: feelings. Focus on feelings.


Feelings?  Feelings?  I tried that last round and it got me knocked out!!  So, I don't know how good that advice is.

I am almost glad that I did get knocked out because the idea of writing a 1 page story looks scary.

Not that I wouldn't mind the trial.

I should say, trying to write a 1 page GOOD story seems daunting.  Even more daunting is to not make it a skit..

Dan
Posted by: LC, March 31st, 2018, 11:54pm; Reply: 70

Quoted from DanC
... I should say, trying to write a 1 page GOOD story seems daunting.  Even more daunting is to not make it a skit..Dan

And then you'd have to write three of them. ::)

Posted by: eldave1, April 1st, 2018, 12:36am; Reply: 71

Quoted from LC

And then you'd have to write three of them. ::)



Yes. It's a try-fecta
Posted by: khamanna, April 1st, 2018, 2:53am; Reply: 72

Quoted from jayrex


It was hardcore, I once wrote the words 'The End' on the sixth page, got disqualified.


The parameter set in stone - we never even complained!
Posted by: khamanna, April 1st, 2018, 2:56am; Reply: 73
Dan, actually a skit would be a comedy. and some of them made second and third places at MP one-page comp.
Posted by: khamanna, April 1st, 2018, 5:09am; Reply: 74
I don't know if posting three comments in a row is allowed but I'll go for it as a really revolutionary thought occurred to me and I must share it with you.

I think that technically you don't have any parameters this round (except for page limit) because voters wouldn't know if you broke the genre parameter or not and Sean is known to be very tolerant towards any parameter breaking.
Posted by: jayrex, April 1st, 2018, 5:20am; Reply: 75

Quoted from LC

I'm assuming Javier, that you wrote The End on the next page not the sixth?  :D

P.S. I wrote two one-pagers in my sleep last night just for the challenge. A cinch, right?   ;D


You're right!
Posted by: jayrex, April 1st, 2018, 5:21am; Reply: 76

Quoted from khamanna


The parameter set in stone - we never even complained!


Yeah you just have to accept it.
Posted by: jayrex, April 1st, 2018, 5:25am; Reply: 77

Quoted from khamanna
I don't know if posting three comments in a row is allowed but I'll go for it as a really revolutionary thought occurred to me and I must share it with you.

I think that technically you don't have any parameters this round (except for page limit) because voters wouldn't know if you broke the genre parameter or not and Sean is known to be very tolerant towards any parameter breaking.


Writing a complete story in one page is quite tough.  One of the hardest challenges.  But what will Sean ask for in the next two rounds?  
Posted by: Warren, April 1st, 2018, 5:27am; Reply: 78

Quoted from khamanna


I think that technically you don't have any parameters this round (except for page limit) because voters wouldn't know if you broke the genre parameter or not and Sean is known to be very tolerant towards any parameter breaking.


I'm hoping this is monitored somehow as it is one of only 2 parameters. It's a lot easier to write 3 scripts in your genre than having to branch out in to areas you're less comfortable with, that's what makes it interesting.

I think one of the scripts should be disqualified if it is the same genre as another.
Posted by: khamanna, April 1st, 2018, 5:32am; Reply: 79
I agree with you Warren, but assessing the genre is tricky business (comedy for instance).

And I'm pretty sure Disqualifier Sean is not.

(high hopes for some hysteria at the end of the round!)
Posted by: Warren, April 1st, 2018, 5:39am; Reply: 80
I do love hysteria :)
Posted by: AnthonyCawood, April 1st, 2018, 5:49am; Reply: 81
I assumed that Sean/Don would post them as trios, so my three would be all together and make genre differences obvious.

I fully expect the usual genre debates to erupt though, they always do ;-)
Posted by: Warren, April 1st, 2018, 6:15am; Reply: 82
Well that's 3 scripts submitted. I'm not looking at them again, they're starting to do my head in

Bring on round 3!
Posted by: Warren, April 1st, 2018, 6:19am; Reply: 83

Quoted from AnthonyCawood
I assumed that Sean/Don would post them as trios, so my three would be all together and make genre differences obvious.


Oh no, I was hoping for them all to be pooled together, an in everyone's scripts. I think that would be better personally.

Posted by: AnthonyCawood, April 1st, 2018, 6:25am; Reply: 84
As pointed out though, if the scripts are posted like that then the genre requirement does become irrelevant as no reader would know if I'd submitted 3 horror scripts... unless Sean wants to read them all first ;-)
Posted by: Warren, April 1st, 2018, 6:34am; Reply: 85

Quoted from AnthonyCawood
As pointed out though, if the scripts are posted like that then the genre requirement does become irrelevant as no reader would know if I'd submitted 3 horror scripts... unless Sean wants to read them all first ;-)


Well I imagine everyone will select the correct genre on the submission form, you'd think so at least.

Should be relatively easy to tell if they chose two of the same. I could be wrong.
Posted by: khamanna, April 1st, 2018, 6:41am; Reply: 86

Quoted from AnthonyCawood
I assumed that Sean/Don would post them as trios, so my three would be all together and make genre differences obvious.


Makes sense, probably they'll post them together.
Posted by: khamanna, April 1st, 2018, 6:57am; Reply: 87

Quoted from PrussianMosby
Khamanna was on the list too. .

Woah, just noticing this, happy to have made your list, Alex.

PK is on my list of most watched, by the way. You hear me, PK? I'm watching you.
Posted by: Warren, April 1st, 2018, 7:25am; Reply: 88

Quoted from khamanna


PK is on my list of most watched, by the way. You hear me, PK? I'm watching you.


Agreed, Blood Brothers was a thoroughly enjoyable script. Last rounds highlight for me.
Posted by: eldave1, April 1st, 2018, 10:12am; Reply: 89

Quoted from khamanna
I don't know if posting three comments in a row is allowed but I'll go for it as a really revolutionary thought occurred to me and I must share it with you.

I think that technically you don't have any parameters this round (except for page limit) because voters wouldn't know if you broke the genre parameter or not and Sean is known to be very tolerant towards any parameter breaking.


I always try to tow the line just in case.

e.g., I had trilogy idea - three 1 page scripts involving the same characters - moving them through different genres - i.e., Dave and Wife meet - rom/com - Dave and Wife lose baby - drama - Dave and Wife get android son to replace baby - sci-fi.

Didn't do it as didn't want to mess with someone thinking - no - it had to be three separate scripts and ergo three different stories. Think it would have been interesting though
Posted by: AnthonyCawood, April 1st, 2018, 10:25am; Reply: 90
I had the same thought Dave and didn't do it for same reason!
Posted by: PrussianMosby, April 1st, 2018, 11:56am; Reply: 91

Quoted from DanC


Feelings?  Feelings?  I tried that last round and it got me knocked out!!  So, I don't know how good that advice is.

I am almost glad that I did get knocked out because the idea of writing a 1 page story looks scary.

Not that I wouldn't mind the trial.

I should say, trying to write a 1 page GOOD story seems daunting.  Even more daunting is to not make it a skit..

Dan


Well, yeah it was close with yours and I'm sorry for you since it was a bold attempt to go there. But feelings does not necessarily mean sentimental feelings, could also be anger or scare or feel intelligent, subtle, even confusing or easy… I just think the worst you can do in whatever kind of expression is evoke nothing, being trivial.

This round will be interesting.
Posted by: Stumpzian, April 1st, 2018, 12:58pm; Reply: 92
Just submitted my three. Am interested to know the specfics of how the scoring will work.
Posted by: Stumpzian, April 1st, 2018, 4:10pm; Reply: 93
Just reread mine and am second guessing.
Maybe I should've written each in reverse time order. Then, for good measure, done a William Burroughs -- that is, cut all three into pieces, mix them up, and reassemble.
Posted by: AnthonyCawood, April 1st, 2018, 4:15pm; Reply: 94
I'm struggling to work out which ones of mine to submit, I might adopt your suggestion Stump!
Posted by: Warren, April 1st, 2018, 4:44pm; Reply: 95
I was actually going to do a script about fishing this round in reverse order, but realised it would be boring whether I did it forwards, backwards, or sideways. Oh well.
Posted by: AnthonyCawood, April 1st, 2018, 4:48pm; Reply: 96
LOL
Posted by: PKCardinal, April 1st, 2018, 4:56pm; Reply: 97
I, too, had a concept that connected the three pages in a unique way. Can't say what that is without outing myself on one of my scripts. I abandoned the idea out of an abundance of caution.

I'll share the idea when the round is over.
Posted by: PKCardinal, April 1st, 2018, 4:59pm; Reply: 98

Quoted from khamanna

Woah, just noticing this, happy to have made your list, Alex.

PK is on my list of most watched, by the way. You hear me, PK? I'm watching you.


Oh, snap. No pressure. As it sits, at least two of my scripts are set to disappoint. But, you've inspired me (terrified me) into taking another pass to see if I can't find some way... any way... to make them worthy.
Posted by: PKCardinal, April 1st, 2018, 5:05pm; Reply: 99

Quoted from Warren


Agreed, Blood Brothers was a thoroughly enjoyable script. Last rounds highlight for me.


That's multiple compliments from you. I do appreciate it. It calms the angst-filled creative side of me. :)

I'm trying to rewrite Blood Brothers to smooth out a few of the problems. If I can't find someone else to shoot it, I may just do it myself. Haven't tried that before!
Posted by: Warren, April 1st, 2018, 5:29pm; Reply: 100

Quoted from PKCardinal


That's multiple compliments from you. I do appreciate it. It calms the angst-filled creative side of me. :)



Based on your previous two scripts I think you're a strong competitor for the win.

Also, most of the 8 writers that are left are SS regulars and established as good writers. You're a bit of a dark horse (actually let's go with Trojan horse).

I had never read any your work before this comp, but I'll definitely be keeping an eye out for it from now on.

Good luck, I look forward to seeing what you put out.
Posted by: Warren, April 1st, 2018, 5:36pm; Reply: 101
Following on from my last comment, I'm very happy to be sharing the quarters with some of my favourite writers, Dave, Anthony, and James. Wouldn't be a loss to go out from this point.

Not sure I'd still be here anyway if Steve Miles and Mark Renshaw had entered. Steve's work blows me away every time, he's one of the most consistently brilliant writers here, in my opinion.

And Mark, well he's Mark haha.
Posted by: AnthonyCawood, April 1st, 2018, 6:10pm; Reply: 102
Here, here, Warren - good company indeed!

Best of luck to all.
Posted by: AnthonyCawood, April 1st, 2018, 6:58pm; Reply: 103
Trying to figure out which to submit, accidentally wrote another one... loving this challenge - have 10 new scripts!
Posted by: AnthonyCawood, April 1st, 2018, 7:08pm; Reply: 104
Right, submitted my three... time for bed.
Posted by: LC, April 1st, 2018, 7:30pm; Reply: 105
Jeepers, there's a real mutual appreciation society going on here.

Don't worry, I'm just jealous.  :P

P.S. Ten scripts AC?!
And good one Dave, 'try-fecta'. :)
Posted by: AnthonyCawood, April 1st, 2018, 7:41pm; Reply: 106
One that didn't fit in first round and one that did, one in second round and seven 1 pagers..
Posted by: LC, April 1st, 2018, 7:59pm; Reply: 107
We'll, I'm looking for scripts to review on the Blog page so maybe there'll be some good candidates.

Filmmakers are always on the lookout for super-shorts easy to film, minimal cast, one location.
Posted by: Stumpzian, April 1st, 2018, 8:03pm; Reply: 108
Whatever happened to Ren? He had class -- and he made me laugh.
Posted by: eldave1, April 1st, 2018, 8:21pm; Reply: 109

Quoted from Warren
Following on from my last comment, I'm very happy to be sharing the quarters with some of my favourite writers, Dave, Anthony, and James. Wouldn't be a loss to go out from this point.

Not sure I'd still be here anyway if Steve Miles and Mark Renshaw had entered. Steve's work blows me away every time, he's one of the most consistently brilliant writers here, in my opinion.

And Mark, well he's Mark haha.


Feeling's mutual.

It is nice to see that WARDD didn't break you after all :)
Posted by: eldave1, April 1st, 2018, 8:22pm; Reply: 110

Quoted from LC
Jeepers, there's a real mutual appreciation society going on here.

Don't worry, I'm just jealous.  :P

P.S. Ten scripts AC?!
And good one Dave, 'try-fecta'. :)


Gracias
Posted by: FrankM, April 1st, 2018, 8:28pm; Reply: 111

Quoted from LC
Filmmakers are always on the lookout for super-shorts easy to film, minimal cast, one location.


With standard screenplay format, you could get FADE IN, FADE OUT and ten different locations on a one-page script (though nine of then will have only a single line of action, and one could get all chatty with two).
Posted by: LC, April 1st, 2018, 8:36pm; Reply: 112

Quoted from FrankM
With standard screenplay format, you could get FADE IN, FADE OUT and ten different locations on a one-page script (though nine of then will have only a single line of action, and one could get all chatty with two).

Well yes, you could do that...
You could also have your one page set on the moon with SFX. Bigger budget though, eh?

Posted by: Mr. Blonde, April 1st, 2018, 8:42pm; Reply: 113
I would say that the less description you have to do, the better off you are... unless you have a real story to tell. In my honest opinion, the best short I think I ever wrote was a 1-pager. It forces you to get really creative since you don't have the page room to rely on dialogue.
Posted by: DanC, April 1st, 2018, 9:11pm; Reply: 114
Or you could write the story in 3 different genres.  

For ex.  Mom loses baby.  Kills self in a drama setting.
Mom loses baby, full blown horror as she kills several hospital staff members.

Mom loses baby, aliens visit her, give her a child that could save or destroy the human race.

3 stories, all the same start, yet totally go in very different directions.

Dan
Posted by: PKCardinal, April 1st, 2018, 9:46pm; Reply: 115
Submitted.

Ended up with four scripts. Had to speed-write the last one when I decided my third probably wouldn't count in the genre I needed to clear the parameters.

Didn't think ya'll would accept a Hatfield/McCoy script as a Western. Despite the fact that it's WEST Virginia. That should count, right? :)
Posted by: MarkItZero, April 1st, 2018, 10:28pm; Reply: 116
It's not letting me submit for some reason.
Posted by: Don, April 1st, 2018, 10:33pm; Reply: 117

Quoted from MarkItZero
It's not letting me submit for some reason.


Email 'em to me.

"It doesn't matter whether a cat is black or white, as long as it catches mice."

Posted by: MarkItZero, April 1st, 2018, 10:36pm; Reply: 118
All good, figured out the problem. I'll get 'em up.
Posted by: MarkItZero, April 1st, 2018, 11:02pm; Reply: 119
I thought mine were good yesterday. But then I looked at them tonight and thought... Dear God, what have I done?

Best of luck to all!
Posted by: Warren, April 2nd, 2018, 12:00am; Reply: 120

Quoted from MarkItZero
I thought mine were good yesterday. But then I looked at them tonight and thought... Dear God, what have I done?

Best of luck to all!


Don't believe his lies! It's a psych out!
Posted by: khamanna, April 2nd, 2018, 12:30am; Reply: 121
Wait, 10 scripts instead of three? Scripts not good? The site won't let submit?
Oh the signs of pre-posting agony!

Have a happy Tri-fecta, all!
Posted by: khamanna, April 2nd, 2018, 1:59am; Reply: 122
Gave one star to this thread. Hehe, I didn't mean it - just practicing. Feels like you're the king of the world by the way. Oh, the powers...
Posted by: FrankM, April 2nd, 2018, 10:24am; Reply: 123
So since there will be a large number of short reads of variable quality, I’d suggest a trick to help calibrate your 1-to-5 scale. Read through a handful of them before giving any ratings (people with scads of spare time could read them all before giving any ratings). Rate the initial sample last.

That will give you a notion of what’s out there, so you don’t end up regretting a 5 when you find something even better... or end up giving everyone a 1 due to unrealistic expectations under these parameters.
Posted by: Stumpzian, April 2nd, 2018, 10:29am; Reply: 124

Quoted from FrankM
So since there will be a large number of short reads of variable quality, I’d suggest a trick to help calibrate your 1-to-5 scale. Read through a handful of them before giving any ratings (people with scads of spare time could read them all before giving any ratings). Rate the initial sample last.

That will give you a notion of what’s out there, so you don’t end up regretting a 5 when you find something even better... or end up giving everyone a 1 due to unrealistic expectations under these parameters.


I was thinking the exact same thing.
Posted by: ajr, April 2nd, 2018, 10:36am; Reply: 125
I'm no math major, but since it appears that Sean was good to us readers (by abusing the writers) in giving us 24 total pages to read, I'll probably read them all first before rating them.

I'll probably rate them on a curve too, taking into consideration how hard it is to convey a story on a single page.
Posted by: Isiah, April 2nd, 2018, 11:23am; Reply: 126
Where can we read the scripts?
Posted by: khamanna, April 2nd, 2018, 11:33am; Reply: 127
Isiah, I always click on "recent threads" in the top right menu.
Also, if you can see "Writers Tournament" under the ticking clock - you can click that one and it will take you to the whole deal. All the tournament thread including the newest entries.
It's three threads under the ticking clock. I mean the ticking clock in the top right-hand menu - it's up there and it's not ticking anymore. To the left of the movie banner. Hope you find it.
Posted by: eldave1, April 2nd, 2018, 11:36am; Reply: 128
Just posted
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